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Im going insane
your taking my refrane
throwing me to the dogs
Surrendering my fragile mind
to the fog
Drowning in your river of blood
Im again left to wonder
what would i do when i went under
Would i be such a tortured soul
be thrown away
like i was told
I know whats coming but thats okay
better than letting you slip
Away
Getting through this is harder than i
thought
my mind is distroute
on the empty silent coven of truth
Now
That everlasting memory of you
Its just a string of thought left tangable
only by me
I surrender my soul only to thee
Without you i am nothing but a shadow
Uniquely shattered though
- Title: Surrendered, love?
- Artist: Meeko512
- Description: this poem is about a lover that is giving her soul to her one true love and how by being together they are taring one another apart....this is my first poem im submitting so please be nice XD...
- Date: 05/24/2009
- Tags: love surrender
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Dhampir Pureblood - 08/25/2009
- Really deep.
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- StarmonyAlways - 05/26/2009
- its really good for a first poem!!!
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