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Running.
Adrenaline, Breathing.
Heat and Wind.
Pounding, panting.
Air and Sweat.
Slowing down, then speeding up.
Cross the line and then you're done.
- by Catarina Una |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/25/2009 |
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- Title: Running
- Artist: Catarina Una
- Description: This is my first time trying poetry. Advice would be so helpful. >.> I know it's probably going to be horrible, but it's what I've got. I know this a different form of poetry, but I forgot what it was called. >.< Once again, It was ment to be short.
- Date: 05/25/2009
- Tags: running
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Comments (3 Comments)
- I Like to Eat Faces - 01/17/2010
- Thats pretty good, especially for a first piece. Its almost a cross between a Idyll poem and a Cinquain. You should look up poem types and structures. There may be a poetry career ahead of you is you so choose. ^_^
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- Catarina Una - 05/26/2009
- no, not yet. ^^
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- xx_ILY_mari_xx - 05/26/2009
- me?/ i love it <33 keep it up!!!// have u done any more poetry???
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