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Saying goodbye is something we don't like to do,
It means leaving behind our few but definite truths,
"Goodbye" is a word generally said with dread,
Because going away from the ones you love and moving ahead,
Typically involves several sad and lonely paths.
But I've learned to not despair,
Because the future holds fair,
There is always more around and more "Hellos" to be said.
- Title: Graduation
- Artist: Monique8
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- Date: 05/25/2009
- Tags: graduation
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ElectraShocked - 05/28/2009
- its good. doen't flow very well, but other than that its awesome. i'd give it a 4/5 check out some of my poems biggrin
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- Tronson - 05/26/2009
- I agree on the flow... Other than that I really like it
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- Monique8 - 05/26/2009
- Thanks for the feedback. Yeah this was an example of one of my irregular meter poems. Nothing in paticular. Haha.
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- gaelic_twilight - 05/25/2009
- Maybe you should work a bit on your flow.
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