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Do you see the waves
Blowing gently in the wind
They look like slaves
Going and going untill the very end
- by piglet9876543210 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: Waves
- Artist: piglet9876543210
- Description: I just thought of it one day when i was at the beach
- Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: waves
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Lil_slave_violet - 02/21/2013
- It's very lovely
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- Nizhoni_Kun - 07/27/2012
- why Is voting over? I love it Ilove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- DarkZero97 - 03/11/2012
- That's the best one I've seen so far you have a talent for poetry
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- Slinkenhofer - 02/09/2012
- Far too simple. The English language can be a beautiful thing; try and use some more of it to capture your meaning.
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- sammyslamin - 07/31/2011
- good
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- Yutora - 11/23/2010
- That was interesting to say at least. 3/5
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- meet ur angel - 09/07/2010
- i guess it is good, 3/5
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