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I need your love.
I made you my goal.
You broke my heart.
You killed my soul.
Weeks have passed
Still I cry.
Though my love will last,
My body will die.
The future is bleak
As I love you still.
My pulse is weak
I must seal the deal.
I taste the metal,
I load the gun.
I feel the barrel,
I want to run.
My patience is shrinking
As I dream of your stare.
And now I am thinking,
I just don't care.
- Title: I Don't Care
- Artist: Tagga
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Description:
Just another old poem of mine I found, obviously the title tells all.
Inspired by broken romance.
Don't be afraid to comment ^.^ - Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: heartbrake
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Tagga - 07/31/2010
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@Castryn
I love Apocalyptica. Never heard of the other song though.
Thanks for the feedback, it's nice to see my otherwise mediocre work is making someone smile. smile - Report As Spam
- Castryn - 07/31/2010
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This is amazing! I really love this one!
Also, ever heard the song, "I Don't Care" by Apocalyptica? Your poem reminds me of that song. (In a good way) as well as "With This Knife" by Smile Empty Soul. [5/5] - Report As Spam
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