Bye

• Artist: jason0428
• Description: I leave with a bye,
  but then i cry,
  while leaving a sigh,
  i see you cry.
  
  My heart is broken,
  there is no token
  to heal me from this wound,
  that i wish I had sued,
  before it was too late,
  leaving a gate,
  between me and you.
  
  i know this poem is crappy,
  but i wish to be happy,
  after what you did to me.
  I know you are sorry,
  but that doesn't care me,
  from this trauma you left with me.
• Date: 05/30/2009
• Tags: love heartbroken

sorry my sis wrote this, i was forced to let her write it because she isn't old enough to have a account on gaia. ps. shes fat.

HIS SISTER: this poem was a poem i just thought of from the top of my head razz so please don't blame my brother nor me if this poem is crappy.
....... I made a rhym un-consiously razz

Comments

[Mekolena1323]

I think its okay. And you shouldnt be a jerk to your sister, be lucky you still have yours!!

[oXPinkAngelXo]

this is coolio dude!!!and dont b mean to ur sistr-u might be fat and your subconscious knows it but you dont consciously know it and for all we kno you could weigh 1000 pounds!!!!!so leave ur sistr alone!!!

[Daxneverwinter]

I think this is fine. Personally, I cant write well, but I have a bias against myself. Anywho, keep going, and don't be mean to your sister, sooner or later she might be the one who saves your life.

[jason0428]

oppps.... typo! for the "i know you are sorry but this doesn't CARE me" part , instead of CARE it's supposed to be CURE razz