Senseless Surrender

• Artist: D i a
• Description: A poem I wrote a while ago, when I was...well, one word: hospital. A lot of things had been happening at the time with friends as well. I found it and thought that it was actually kind of good, and thought I'd put it out there to see if anyone else likes my wording. Leave a comment if you want.
• Date: 05/31/2009
• Tags: senseless surrender

Senseless madness
raging inside
a delicate body
crushed with confusion
hope and mind
sick and shaking
cold and breaking
please don't let me cry

Motionless surrender
a heart
whose beat
crushed with confusion
hate and feet
tossed and turned
wept and blurred
please don't let me die

Comments

[SlamminSquirrelBaby]

Its very nice. I have many similar poetry. Mainly when I was told I would never run again. I know the feeling.

[Daxneverwinter]

Honey...... you know I hate it when you talk about this... it tears me apart.... *cries*