A Heart So Tame

• Artist: 14annna14
• Description: It's just a little poem. It's about a boy that leaves and comes back knowing he could never leave her.
• Date: 06/01/2009
• Tags: tamed heart

You said me goodbye,
You said it in vain,
I tried not to cry,
But your heart was so tame,
I wanted to believe that oh so soon,
You'd be coming back to me,
In July or near June,
Those days and months,
That fade away,
I'm certain they will come back some day,
Now as I'm crying alone on the porch,
A figure appears with a light like a torch,
I realize the figure that's coming to me,
Is a love from the past,
An old memory,
As I light my way to come to you,
The figure comes closer,
I looked deeper and saw your soul,
Your heart was still tame,
Though our love was so old,
And now as I sit here with you by my heart,
I never shall think of us being apart.

Comments

[Demonia Draconis]

that was so touching it almost made me cry. and if you could please look at my poems and from one poet to another lets share how we make things in our writing better^_^

[14annna14]

Please rate it a high score. I think it's a good poem. And I'm not saying that because I want gold. I wrote that when my boyfriend left because of family problems. He ran away. But he came back because he couldn't leave me.