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• Artist: Fantastic Nightmares
• Description: A poem I wrote when I fell in love with the most weirdest person in the world.
• Date: 06/02/2009
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I always tought love was just a word.
I always tought love was just a noun.
I always tought love was just a prefix
But love is far much more.

My eyes sparkled at your sight
Like the stars that shine over night
Disapearing into the sun's rays
Waiting to come back out again.

Everytime I see you,
my world is turned upside down.
You make me go crazy
and it's you I pronounce.

Whatever you want,
just let me know.
Do you want the moon
or the stars?
Do you want the sun
or the clouds?
Do you want the wind
or the breeze?
It's you all I need.

Every word you speak
makes me every minute quite weak
Why are you doing this to me?
Bringing so much happiness...
I cannot take
I hope it's not all
just a fake.

Comments

[Fantastic Nightmares]

Good point. I didn't noticed. well, practice makes better.

[notblaze]

Very good! It's spelled "taught" though. And your rhyming pattern isn't totally consistent. The meaning was really good though, you had the right idea.