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Flowers, everlasting blossoms.
Autumn’s fair breath, bone chilling.
Death is freedom, never ending glory.
True love, blissfully chaotic.
Pain, love’s emotional betrayal.
Thus is my life, everlasting misery.
I wished for love but only endured the after effect.
I only wished to now be saved.
Saved by the one who brings me eternal pain.
The only one who can save me is my true love, my cause for pain.
So please, save me my love, my heart ache, my pain.
Save me…save me…
- by crecre_205 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/02/2009 |
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- Title: Painful Betrayal
- Artist: crecre_205
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Description:
This is another of my many poems. I'm trying my best to get my work out there and get some feedback, so if you could please rate and comment, it would be a big help. ^_^
Please and thank you!
~Cre
P.S. - let me know if you want me to rate something of yours. I love helping out others as well. ^_^ - Date: 06/02/2009
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Comments (3 Comments)
- gip2123 - 06/04/2009
- well done bravo! bravo! if i may be so bold as to say... inspiring! absolutly wonderful. you get a five from me... and you have inspirerd me to write something in the future, but if i could ask a small favor from what seems to be a pofessional, please do revise my poem(valvet heart) it would mean ever so much to me!
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- JayEagle - 06/02/2009
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Hey hunny, still love your work. I really like it.
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- Lady Alice Road Kamelot - 06/02/2009
- This is so melancholy...I absolutely love it! The imagery is amazing! Good work! Rate meh?
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