its hard

• Artist: sweety bird 1
• Description: its a short poem
• Date: 06/04/2009
• Tags: hard

its hard to love someone you dont know.its hard tocome into the sun when you have been in the darkness.its hard to bloom when its not the right season.its hard to love when you dont know how to. it hard to have feelings when you have never felt any.its hard.

Comments

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

2/2
Anyway... my thoughts on the poem!!
I think it's a bit too short. You should use capitalization and punctuation. Edited work gets better ratings and comments. Maybe it should be formatted as a poem, not a passage. I advise you delete and report that awful comment below by Bone or whatever. But the peom is pretty nice.
3.5/5

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

Oooook. I don't really like the poem. But to use the word gay as a substitute for bad is very offensive. It's implying that gay is a bad thing. It is NOT. Only a disrespectful and closed-minded person would use that word as a sinonym for bad, or disgusting, or awful. I can't believe people now use that word to express negative feelings towards someone or something. It's horrible, and anyone who uses the word that way is too. 27-Bone-27, you are a disgrace. That is very very low.

[27-Bone-27]

u guys r realy gay