invisable

• Artist: wolfy222
• Description:
• Date: 06/06/2009
• Tags: invisable

i am gone to the eyes
i have no maening but to
hide in myself
i float away with the wind
and never retern

i make no promeses that
i can see
for me, myself is
lost in the life of
nothing
i hade not to
be seen so that i may
rmain invisable

never to be seen with the eyes of another
person

Comments

[DoubleMintTwins18]

I really like this poem. Its unique. I havn't seen anything like this one. Its really deep, and detailed. Great work. 5/5 You should think about doing this for a living, or publishing this poem. Please comment my stuff. ~xox~

[Automatic Phail]

wow....................deep.....................cool............................good