Blind

• Artist: l Princess Sugar l
• Description: I was having one of my, no one understands me moments and wrote this in class. I know im not perfect, so please help me improve my writing, it would be highly appreciated ^^" lol I love critisism cause its better than someone lying, lets all use the honesty policy :3
• Date: 06/07/2009
• Tags: blind misunderstood fake

They say that she’s funny
And sweeter than honey
They say she’s so loud
Yet always brings the crowd
They say she’s constantly crazy
But I wonder if that’s all they see
Do they ever hear the insecurity in her screams
Do they ever think she’s not as she seems
This girl, they will never find
As they search for her heart so blind
Sadly, all she can do is hide
Hide behind her well plastered smile
That smile that would’ve died
If it had not been for her will to entertain
She would’ve been the person behind you in the driving lane
The lane of not understanding you only know a lie
The endless twists and turns leaving you wanting to die
In the end not caring what’s going to happen
Ready to commit that fatal sin
Unable to cry you finally say goodbye
You suddenly wishing you weren’t blind, right before you die

Comments

[nekolina tenchi]

wowwy .-. you're a great writer X3

[faux_fur_rabbit]

I liked it. It's simply amazing. Please read my latest one, I believe it's one of my best. And I wish to have somebody critique it. BTW, you get a 10,000,000 out of 10. But since the scale only goes up to 5, I guess that'll do. ^.^

[Forever_in_Laffter]

wow awesome i luv it and i sang to it works as a poem and a songawesome 5/5