Dying alone. (8.6.09)

• Artist: ThisIsMyDeathbed_x
• Description: this is a .... 'nice' little poem i wrote yesterday (8.6.09 - my b-day :D )
  
  It's not that great, but rate it anywaysss! :)
• Date: 06/08/2009
• Tags: tore

Dead on the inside,
and all on her own.
Tore to pieces,
and bruised to the bone.

Stung from the depth,
of her very heart.
Bleeding the pain out
'til her very soul parts.

A hole an inch deep,
is imbedded in her thigh,
but it doesn't sting more,
than the tears that she cries.

Dead on the inside,
and all on her own,
weak as the blood flows,
she's dying alone.

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

THANK YOU KING OF TRASH! I love you! biggrin :L

[King of Trash]

ahh the B-day... it just gets better and better with each passing year... (sarcasm) anyways, 5/5... Would I give you anything else?

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! THANK YOUUUU AALL!!!! biggrin much much much appreciated

[DDrox316]

omigosh, this is so beautiful ^^ I love it heart heart
it's so sad... sad
I was sad on my birthday this year too :[
**FAVORITEE*************** :]

[faux_fur_rabbit]

Right, 'nice' describes it perfectly. ^^
I love it, along with every one of your poems that I've read before.
5/5. Good job!

[Definition_Of_It]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaw, ya little emo ! :O ;L

And that's coming from ME . surprised xd

[Dragons Willow]

i give it a 5/5!! happy belated b-day! *gives u chocolate to make ur insides happy* here. you convey pain very well here. short, simple, and...sad. be happy!!