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It was almost too delightful for my own good,
As she walked towards me,
A beauteous flower in her hair as she understood,
What, in fact, she could see;
My fluttering heart as we gazed into each others’ eyes
That we were both filled with glee.
I was a knight and she was my princess,
Our lives, far too different, anyone would agree
Though I knew, about her terrible fate,
Of which she could not be set free,
For this palace’s laws are quite different,
In which the princess would be sacrificed to the sea.
I constantly assured her we would never be separated,
Because of the love we shared, her and me
And I promised to protect her regardless of anything,
As her knight of chivalry.
But as word reached the towns,
Everyone would disagree.
And at that, I looked at my princess and said, “Nay.
I will never abandon thee.”
The time came where the sacrifice was at hand,
Her hand in mine, we stood there, by the sea
Her father stepped in and drew his sword, as I drew mine
And all he said as he looked at her was, “You are the key.”
I lunged forward him, plotting my strike,
But she…
Her executioner being her father,
Would not let a sword strike he,
And my eyes followed as I watched my sword plunge thee
Three steps back, as my eyes widened in horror, I fell
And my darling smiled at me, as she fell into the sea
When the stars shone, as everyone turned to stone,
I limped closer to the sea;
When her father stared and never even cared,
I limped closer to the sea;
And so, as the night continued, I laid down by her side,
Of my life and my bride,
In the sanctuary surrounded by the sea,
In her tomb, where I shall be
- Title: My Darling "_____"
- Artist: Arekou
- Description: Another English extra credit assignment. Uhm, this poem was actually modeled after Edgar Allan Poe's famous "Annabel Lee". I found that it was one of my favorite works by him and it is what inspired me to make the ending quite...sad. Though, this is entirely my work and worded by me. Rate if you want, but please comment, for I accept any type of criticism.
- Date: 06/10/2009
- Tags: darling blank
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- just_cuttie_lol - 06/17/2009
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