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crying........
she's crying
all alone
in the moonlit sky
she pleads that the heaven's will give her strength
but know one ever answer's
she will do anything
give a life or even take one
all she want's is happiness
but can't afford to live her own life
so she grab's it
starts hacking away
but know one can hear her crying
one last hack and her life will be taken
'' i didn't want to do this but you gave me no choice ''
she lifts up the KNIFE and then..................
he grabbed it
the shadow...............................................
now she is sitting there with know body ,
know one
and there she is
still crying alone
in the moonlit sky
xd
- by xXxPheonix_NightfallxXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/13/2009 |
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- Title: ....Crying....
- Artist: xXxPheonix_NightfallxXx
- Description: a girl who has a problem with herself , and is just alone
- Date: 06/13/2009
- Tags: crying moonlit death
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Comments (3 Comments)
- claire-bear1234567 - 06/20/2009
- great poem its awesome your like one of the best poets i have ever heard of
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- emmywinner56 - 06/16/2009
- i love how you did 'know' instead of 'no'.i don't know if that was intentional,but it made the poem so much better!it's like 'know one' is a person who is actually there and 'knows' all about her and this is amazing.i'm starting to cry!this is a...miraculous poem.thank you!
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- Xxhells bloodxX - 06/13/2009
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wow thats intense...
makes my poems look like s**t -_- - Report As Spam