if only, ifonly (remix)

• Artist: The Number Nine
• Description: Song name is
  If only, if only(the dead children cry
  
  First song ive wrote in over a year and not finished yet but i got writers block so wth i submitted it.
• Date: 06/17/2009
• Tags: only ifonly remix dead children

*If only, If only(The dead children cry)*

{If only, if only. The dead children cry
{"What if we lived and never we died"
{Their souls wait alone, In the light of the sun.
{They hide from the pain but they know its not done

They used to be happy, living their lives
Now they know better and see through the lies
They thought they were happy they thought they were kind
They know they were trapped, to be played with their mind
So now they escaped, to be set free unto time
Searching for something they could call mine

{}If only, if only. The dead children cry
{}"What if we lived and never we died"
{}Their souls wait alone, In the darkness of night
{}they pray for the savoir and for the gift of his light

Comments

[Fabulous Angel01]

It's kinda dark.

[saiga heretic]

i dont understand the relivance of that

[SilverClan_Rainstar]

I for one thought it was amazing. I love poems like this. Rock on!
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[SilvertongueSagittarius]

I like the original better. woodpeckers and wolves. you just cant beat that combo