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Dead bodies scattered all over the place
The sound of screams filling passerby's ears
Bullet shells cover every inch of space
Soldiers see family faces streaked with tears
Hundreds of people lose their lives for this
A war that so far sees no future end
A lot of people all share the same wish:
To see their war-battered loved ones again
Blood has been spilled across Mother Earth's face
Nurses have to tend to countless wounds
These wars keep on pitching race against race
Hopefully all this terror will end soon
Meanwhile families will keep crying
As the forsaken soldiers keep dying
- by I_IFlyleafFanI_I |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/18/2009 |
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- Title: War
- Artist: I_IFlyleafFanI_I
- Description: This is a sonnet I wrote for my English class. Please comment. Criticism welcome...just don't be too harsh please!
- Date: 06/18/2009
- Tags: wars blood dying
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Comments (6 Comments)
- vitca wolfbane - 11/13/2010
- deep and good and true.
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- Rizu77 - 06/25/2009
- bloody brilliant. 5/5 from me.
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- kooka-pool_15 - 06/23/2009
- i really like that it explains war alot
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- I_IFlyleafFanI_I - 06/19/2009
- thank you
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- MJgwarrocker66 - 06/18/2009
- it really explains the penalty of war. and its breath-taking. fairly written. 5/5
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- i run with wolves 303 - 06/18/2009
- i love it... it's amazing. i couuld not tell you exactly why... but it is. 5/5
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