Honey Scars

• Artist: Zuix
• Description: Ok, I was told to change my description.
  
  Enjoy the bland-ness. (And the poem)
• Date: 06/18/2009
• Tags: ohsnapdontgotheregirlfriend

The throbbing in my head,
The beating in my chest,
lets me know that I'm alive.

The pain in my side
The scars that I can't hide,
All remind me of you.

You know my secret,
It is true.

But do you know that I can't live without you?

Like a set instinct
I laugh at your jokes.
--Even when they're not funny!

I need you, babe

As much as Whinnie the Pooh needs honey!

Comments

[[-Henshin-]]

Mad props for the Winnie the Pooh reference. I like the flow and the solid rhythm that can be seen as soon as it starts off. Nice to see something with a solid structure in the arena.

[GiftingGhostie]

that was great ^^. im tempted to add one of mine now XD.

[Marionette_Mentation]

the rhyme was nice and the ending was so adorable. hehe comment back please. ^.^