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Life is a mysterious thing
Hard to give but easy to take
I have no purpose to my making
In my heart i want a stake
That is why a gun's to my head
Life is not simple for me
I guess its because im unique
I hate it all don't you see
Depression makes it hard to think
A raven sits at my window
Why would you do this it said to me
You have a whole life ahead of you
Life's to difficult don't you see
I hate myself it's true
The ravan sat there questionably
I can't take the pain anymore
The raven looked at me again
It stole the gun out of my hand and it was no more
I pulled out a knife the raven in horror
I stabbed my heart its all over
- by LacylovesNirvana |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/20/2009 |
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- Title: Poem made when i was bored
- Artist: LacylovesNirvana
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Description:
Ok I made this one day when I was sad(also extremly bored)
I am sure it sucks terribly.
Oh well enjoy.
- Date: 06/20/2009
- Tags: weird depressing raven
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Braided_Twist - 03/31/2010
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Its good, a lot of thought into this one. I gave a 3/5 for one simple reason. A little off the topic, of depression. It went from poem into story. Which is really good. I congratulate you.
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- LacylovesNirvana - 06/23/2009
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Wow Thanks for the good ratings guys ^___^
I didnt know I was good.
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