Hesitation

• Artist: Meymo
• Description: I haven't written poetry in years. Yet I wanted to try something out; and I'm not that disappointed with the result. Please, any feedback or criticism is highly encouraged.
• Date: 06/22/2009
• Tags: hesitation poem open love fear

This moment can be ruined.

By everyone that are on to us.
By us and our growing fear
as we both look for shadows.
Fear itself is our enemy
If we let it be.

A cold hand meets another;
you jump at a distant sound
Yet this I would not trade:
not for anything, at all.
We can't afford more time wasted.

This moment must not be ruined.

Comments

[vv7722]

It doesn't make a lot of sense... but I really like it. Keep up the good work.