A Bullet to the Brain

• Artist: Silvar_sigrund
• Description: no real Discription for this one i just was to say comment on it and rate it please
• Date: 07/03/2009
• Tags: bullet brain

Paint it black
And bring me back
Don't let it die
Don’t say “Good-bye”

Though they wish us to part
Your always in my heart
I’ll forever stand by your side
Even though, my tears, I hide

I lay hear listening
To your heart beating
I want to stand here forever
And never wish this to be over

Ill be here all through the night
Because this pain feels so right
You’re the one who stains my heart
You’re the reason I haven’t fallen apart

His words start with a whisper
But make my skin blister
When they turn to screams
Still, they haunt me in my dreams
I’ve tried to numb my pain
With a bullet to the brain
But now I don’t have to bleed
Because you are all I need

Comments

[roxie112]

i dont like this poem. i think its kind of weird. i dont think it was organized enough

have you read "The Wreckage" by vanessa carlton? go for that more, i think that would be cooler

good topic though. you have a good start

[wild flower 89]

wow that was good just one question was this written for anybody in particular or just bored

[scitama]

The more I read, the better it got!! The message was so clear and the "...numb the pain...bullet to the brain part" was excellently written!!

[Graceful_Butterfly555]

i like it... no explanation necessary

[Polly Odd]

This is your best poem. I love it. The emotion shown here is amazing; it's really deep.
But...
I'm sorry for your pain. It is never good to be hurting all the time. I know because I am the same way: always in some type of emotional pain because something isn't going right.
I hope you feel better. Realize, though, that there are people out there who do love you.