DO YOU LOVE ME?

• Artist: VampireKnightress99
• Description: romantic, adoring, so sweet
• Date: 07/07/2009
• Tags: love adore sweet

a girl once asked a boy,
DO YOU LIKE ME...
he said NO.
AM I PRETTY...
he said NO.
then she said,
IF I WERE TO WALK AWAY, WOULD YOU CRY...
and the boy said NO.
then the girl said she had heard too much and turned to walk away...
the boy caught her hand and said..
i dont like you I LOVE YOU
you are not pretty YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL
and if you would walk away i would not cry
i would die

Comments

[Summer6441]

Hey!!! How dare u say that to my friend Mattykins_Mooseword! I LOVE it! And who cares if u don't use caps, and stuff? I DON'T!

[The Condom Hebi]

Ok I love your poem forget these freaks lol You are good!! Who really cares about grammer. Poems are feelings not only words. 5/5!! Congrats

[spellbound_fallen_angel]

I agree with the last two comments... smile

[Mattykins_Mooseword]

Okay, this saying has been everywhere on the Internet. If you're going to put something in the Arenas, make it original. Moreover, you used incorrect grammar and only used punctuation half of the time.
Try submitting something again when you are serious.

[teezasaurus_rex]

i have heard this before
but i still love it :]