Love

• Artist: Pride Synister
• Description: A poem I wrote in some time ago and just recently edited it for grammar and such. I hope you like this one. I guess the overall theme of this poem is this: Love makes us do many things some rational, some crazy; but whatever we do, eventually it iwll come to an end.
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: love

Love made me love, but love made me hate.

Love made me break up, but love made me date.

Love made me happy, but love made me cry.

Love helps me live, but love made me die.

Love made me tell the truth, but love made me lie.

Love brings me down, but love makes me feel I can fly.

Love makes me silent, but love makes me shout.

Love is true, but love makes me doubt.

So love is good, love is bad.

Love is happy, love is sad.

Love is true and I thought I knew you,

But I guess I didn’t and now it’s ended.

I guess it was never intended.

Love has mercy, but love is cruel.

I thought you loved me I was a fool.

Now I'm dead and you cry,

But why?

You didn’t love me.

You didn’t care.

When I needed you, you weren’t there.

But now you will never know,

That my love for you wasn’t just a show.

Comments

[0DD_S3X]

rlli liked it! awesome poet, dont u kno it!!* smile ))

[Amayachi_Mika_Sayomi]

Story of my life. *5*!!

[Pride Synister]

Thanks for all the good comments this was the first poem i ever wrote so it makes me feel as if not all of my stuff isn't shiite ^^

[miryamrox]

wow

[The Owl Eyes]

I really like it. well done. xD

[watermelon1995]

nice repitition