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the best feeling thing in life,
love, it's wonderful,
it can't get better than love
heart ~ heart ~ heart
- by sk8terpunk718 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/10/2009 |
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- Title: love
- Artist: sk8terpunk718
- Description: this is a haiku, that's a poem with three lines. the first line can only have 7 syllables, the second line has 5 and the third 7 again. yes it's suppose to be short, and a challenge. it's simple and sweet, just like love!
- Date: 07/10/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (6 Comments)
- sk8terpunk718 - 07/15/2009
- exactly! that's why i wrote this. to express that love is simple and sweet. it's the best! and most people just use they're wife to get money and to have someone to cook for them. but that doesn't work at my house cuz my dad cooks, lolz!
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- ClairWest - 07/15/2009
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I like it!
It's short and to the point but very true. The best thing in life is love. When you find "the one" as they say, everything judt fits together like a jigsaw puzzle!lol - Report As Spam
- sk8terpunk718 - 07/12/2009
- aw thankyou! smile
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- xXDark_ImprisonmentXx - 07/10/2009
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Ok, I'm lovin the serious Haiku talent here... LOL That sounds silly. XP
But seriously I do think that there is no other better feeling than Love
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- sk8terpunk718 - 07/10/2009
- woops sorry that's what i ment! lol i feel dumb now!
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- Xxhells bloodxX - 07/10/2009
- actually its 5 syllables 7 syllables then 5 syllables dear
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