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In the park
Where i do well
I met i a boy
I loved so well
he came and took my heart from me
and now he wants to set it free.
He took a girl apon his knee
And told her things
he never told me.
Upstairs i went to cry in bed
not a word to my mother was said
My dad came home late one night
and searched for me left and right
He found me hanging from a rope.
And read the letter i had wrote.
dig a grave
dig it deep
place a statue at my feet
and on the statue plave a dove
to show the world
I died for his love
- by Deadly_Kiira |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/11/2009 |
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- Title: In the park
- Artist: Deadly_Kiira
- Description: me and my sister wrote this when i was going through a really depressing time
- Date: 07/11/2009
- Tags: park
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Comments (4 Comments)
- -Strawberry Blonde Head- - 10/08/2009
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I really really liked this.I loved the rhyming.5 stars!!
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- wolf lover112 - 07/25/2009
- dont listen to CaptMatches...i loved it...im going though a hard time 2 but not boy friend troubles...i know how it feel... the feeling like ur hearts being ripped to shreads... piece by piece...my parents are divorcing and they are tryin to get to us by pricy things...i know... well... its a good poem and u should continue
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- Maybe Matches - 07/13/2009
- To be brutally honest, that was really cheesy. The rhythm needs work.
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- silent_assasin413 - 07/12/2009
- wow.. its nice
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