To be or Not to be?

• Artist: Oh_My_Darlinn
• Description: questions that popped in my head April through June of last year made into a pathetic excuse of a poem...comment and rate plz
• Date: 07/16/2009
• Tags: questions love

Should I be me?
Or should I satisfy your desires?
Should I listen to the heart?
Or think logically and listen to the brain?
What if I am wrong?
What if I am right?
If I die tommorow, would I be satisfied?
With what I have done?
With what I have become?
Am I really as perfect as you say?
Then how come YOU are not happy with ME?
Am I a disappointment?
Should I die to make you happy?
Should I lie to make you satisfied?
What should I do?
Give me your pathetic advice that you call philosophy....
and let me prove you wrong...once again
You were there once, and then you left...
So now let us cry.

Comments

[Gator-aide]

For me, the flow felt off center and the poem wasen't what I was expecting of it. However you still did do a nice job on the phrasing.