Lose Me If You Can

• Artist: Fujioko-Senpai
• Description: A simple poem.
• Date: 07/17/2009
• Tags: lose

I played back the memories in my mind,
watching and listening in a third person view.
The smiles and giggles that you caused me to do,
seems like a fantasy to me now almost a fairy tale.

I watched myself playfully run away from you,
"catch me if you can" I cheered to you.
I kept running and running noticing that
you weren't trying your hardest to catch me.

Only if you did try I thought,
than it wouldn't of happened.
Somebody else wouldn't have unwelcomingly joined in,
and caught me like it did...

But now I stare at my dead body on the ground,
the train had caught me that day.

Lose

Me.

If.

You.

Can.

Comments

[lonelyfangirl]

i was abit confused by the title but in the end it all came together i was thinking,untill i noticed i shed a tear i know its weird how i said it but basicaly it realy good

[erotico mollete]

Wow. In all honesty, I dont usually read others poems, because I lose interest. Im taking the time to write a comment here, because I feel it deserves it, not only ws I interested the entire time. But the alst lines are puzzling. nice 5/5