Hello, Darling

• Artist: Diosa de Armarrio
• Description: Another poem for him. <3
  
  Btw, there's no particular rhythm or pattern I'm trying to follow with this one.
• Date: 07/17/2009
• Tags: hello darling love boyfriend nostlagia

Hello, darling.
I've been missing you,
Have you missed me, too?
It's only been a day since we last met,
Though it seems like forever, yet
I can easily recall the smell of your skin,
The gentleness of your touch,
The stubble on your chin.
I miss you so much...

I'll be thinking about you, darling,
As I always do.
And it makes me so happy to remember
That you think of me, too.

Comments

[METRO SKiiES]

I think it's really sweet. The feelings are great. I rather like it. It lacks both elements of poetry and really strong images, though. I'd really give it a three-and-a-half but I think I'll just bump it up to four. Even without hardcore poetic work, it sounds very good and very cute.

[Jakz510]

Cute!