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Her life was taken
as she put the
gun to her head
and pulled the
trigger only one
tear fell down
her cheek as
she smiled and
fell to the floor
holding the note
saying I will
love you until
I die, blood
stained and happy
she took her life
for a boy that
left her for
another....
- by SetsunaXKonoka |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2009 |
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- Title: Life was Taken....
- Artist: SetsunaXKonoka
- Description: At one point I thought of taking the easy way out... Not by a gun but by sticking a knife through my chest.... but instead I just took a pen and wrote and came up with this....
- Date: 07/20/2009
- Tags: life taken dake saddness hatred
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Comments (6 Comments)
- The Huor - 09/20/2010
- This is essentially what happens in Whiskey Lullaby... Unacceptable.
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- i_Falcon98_i - 02/15/2010
- wow... i loved it! beautiful poetry 5/5
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- Rain Rukia - 02/15/2010
- That was reall beautiful 5/5
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- ElectraShocked - 08/04/2009
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I likee it. Read my poem Changing Views? I think it would fit your life, and give you some help if you still feel this way. Good Luck.
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- SetsunaXKonoka - 07/26/2009
- thankyou ^^
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- Linkovich 182 - 07/20/2009
- Whow, I actually visualized what I read. Nice work of words here, very unique smile
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