A very true poem

• Artist: Draco_The Dragon Warrior
• Description: This is a poem I read in one of my favortive manga. BLEACH volume 8. I enjoy this very much and hope you do too.
• Date: 07/21/2009
• Tags: poem pride blade

"It is rust, it can never be trusted. If its owner fails to control it, it will cut him. Yes, pride is like a blade"

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

as true this may be, its not a true poem itself. it needs to have more to it. imagery, creative, most of all feeling and graceful thoughts. this is just blunt words scribbled on paper, or just typed up with no thought. work on it and become something more.

[Falcon Moonshadow]

Short, sharp and to an excellent point. Awesome

[panada0746]

wow.