Life/Death

• Artist: KnaveAnt
• Description: I'm not really sure what it is, but I do know it has a lot to do about life.
• Date: 07/22/2009
• Tags: life death

Life is a pain
Death is a dream
But we always seem
To get stuck in between

Death is a fear
Life is a joy
It seems that way
For every girl and boy

Life is a game
That everyone plays
Death is the demon
We all face one day

Our lives
May be different
But our deaths
Are the same
Beacause life
Is a joy
And yet a pain

Comments

[mirachan3]

Wow I like this one a lot, i think i give it a five. It has great structure, personal meaning, creativity, and flows perfectly. There is no choppyness or anything that takes away from the content. SO GREAT JOB. I hope to see more.