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You're never hard to spot,
You're just that shining dot.
I can always see you glow,
Even through the snow.
I love your glowing essence,
And your wonderful presence.
Why try to run?
That's never any fun.
You'll never make it far,
For you're my shining star.
When day turns to night,
You're always just as bright.
* This is more than just a cute little poem about stars, this poem is also about love and relationships. Example: You're never hard to spot, You're just that shining dot. That means that you're so beautiful that you're easy to spot, even in large crowds. Another Example: Why try to run? That's never any fun. They're having relationship issues or have broken up. You'll never make it far, For you're my shining star. This means I still love and care for you even though we're having problems. When day turns to night, You're always just as bright. This means in the end everything works out for the better. This poem still is about stars, I just want you to know it's also about love, because I'm sure many people wouldn't realise this.
Thank you for your time. heart
Please do not steal my poetry.
- Title: My Shining Star
- Artist: Joe0720
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Description:
This poem was inspired to me by the recently released Lonely Stars, it made me curious if stars would be lonely if they were alive, and I just started writing. This was also inspired by my friend Miss Charlaine whom would always wear gold, sparkly and shiny items.
Please leave a comment. - Date: 07/25/2009
- Tags: shining star love heart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- yslaurent - 09/23/2009
- love it
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- Joe0720 - 09/19/2009
- -blush- I'm glad I'm getting lots of positive comments. This is very nice.
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- yuli-hime - 09/13/2009
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chaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....i love it
ish beautifull 5/5
chu should submit chus avy on the other arena cuz ish beautifull too 3nodding - Report As Spam
- Koraunmidora - 08/25/2009
- Hm.... Well, I really like the image it conveyed, but I think the rhyme seems to take away from that. That's just me, though. Great job! :3
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- Annasay - 08/19/2009
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I almost started to cry (tears of joy) when I read this.
It's beautiful. You have God given talent. Use your gift wisely, it'll take you far.
5/5 (DUH) - Report As Spam
- Joe0720 - 08/17/2009
- Thanks for all the wonderful comments <3 smile Maybe I'll enter some of my other poems...
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- ImYourNumber1Moron - 08/14/2009
- Great poetry ^^ Both cute and with deep meaning! Keep up the great work c:
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