But Mother, I've been good.

• Artist: ViRabbit
• Description: My first attempt at a Pantoum.
• Date: 07/25/2009
• Tags: your heart tastes like chemicals

I told you the damn thing isn't capable of empathy.
I was dancing this morning;
my mouth full of lavender, sun adorned my ankles-
"I think I'll be god today," I said.

I was dancing this morning;
a sour stench filled my lungs, making me bitter
"I think I'll be god today," I said.
that filthy odor of expired love and rot

A sour stench filled my lungs, making me bitter
my mouth full of lavender, sun adorned my ankles-
that filthy odor of expired love and rot
I told you the damn thing isn't capable of empathy.

Comments

[bloody kitty kat 11]

good poem please go check mine out and tell me what you think

[Kya Akai Kitsune]

i like it really its interesting, i havent ever heard of that type of poetry but it seems fun

[saiyan2k1]

i think you did a great job :p it's interesting cause it makes you think about the poem differently every time