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So that's it.
It's finally over.
This tale of two paths.
Two stars,
Two different people.
You saw it, didn't you?
You said,
"let's stay friends."
If I had let go soooner
I wouldn't have exploded.
Now that I'm calm,
I sill want to say
"You're not my type.
I can't stand people like you.
Bye Bye."
It'll hurt to see you,
But you're not my problem anymore.
What's done is done,
And past is so far gone away.
It's time that I finally turn that page.
With rage,
With a shaking hand,
I tore your page apart.
It was fun,
And good for me.
I should thank you one last time,
For not talking to me,
For letting everything build inside me...
I would but you're not worth it.
Your eyes never told me anything,
Just dragged me down into you dispair.
I hope you'll be happy,
Because I'm much happier without you in my heart.
No tears,
No hold backs.
Just a pen and paper.
Farewell boy.
I hope I never see you again.
And that is a wish.
I'll hold my head up high,
And throw your page away.
It wasn't worth keeping.
It was an eyesore.
And a heartache I never deserved.
Good ridance.
- by twitchy_chi |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/26/2009 |
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- Title: Doomed to Fail by: Kitty-kun
- Artist: twitchy_chi
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Description:
One of My dear friends, Kitty, wrote this poem and I was so stunned by it that I asked him if I could submit it into the Gaia Arenas so he could get some more feadback from more, and different, people that are out there surfing the web. So please rate and comment on how you feel after reading this and about how much you like this, and who knows I may get more poems from him.
Also, please stop in to see my other submitions in the arenas. - Date: 07/26/2009
- Tags: doomed fail kittykun
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Comments (3 Comments)
- xXtorn_apart_heartXx - 07/29/2009
- your friend is an amazing writer 5/5
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- Heckova Biker Babe - 07/29/2009
- hell yes! you rock on!
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- Archangel Frost - 07/26/2009
- wow this is truly amazing i like it very much
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