cleansing

• Artist: Midnight RoseX
• Description:
• Date: 08/09/2009
• Tags: cleansing

She is lying in a dense forest
Staring up at the lofty canopy above
Feeling the delicate felt leaves
And lacy moss
Upon her fair skin
The moist drifting vapors
The air so fresh and pure
Laden with the fragrance
Of cedar and pine
Filling her lungs
With the energy of pure essence
Burning away the rooted sorrow
Burried deep within her heart
Carrying her away
To an everlasting forgetfulness and peace
Cleansing her soul from within

Comments

[The Tainted Blac Rose]

This poem is very, how can I say,emotional and when I read it, I could feel the pain and sorrow of this girl. The words are very descriptive and focused on the pain of the girl in the forest. I give it a 5/5