Love and Flowers

• Artist: eragonn9
• Description: A poem I wrote reaallly early this morning. I'm starting to write a little more, and would like feedback.
  my writing is always simple, so don't critiseze that. other wise, reply away
• Date: 08/10/2009
• Tags: love flowers

Love is like a flower. It is beautiful, and every one is a little different, and both seed, grow, and die.
A flower lives but a short time, as love can. Love differs here though, in that while love may last but a few days, a few weeks, it can also last a year. Love can last a decade, through life, and even beyond. A flower cannot do this.
A flower is a symbol of love, but cannot compare to the real thing.

Comments

[sycoskater]

aww its really sweet and true

i write poems but other peoples always seem 2 b betta lol

i love it lol

keep up the good work darlin xx