For the ones who judge harshly

• Artist: Uta Sumire
• Description: Beat this. If you give me a mean comment, I'll just delete it.
• Date: 08/12/2009
• Tags: ones judge harshly pissed

Everyone is the same.
You must be like this
do that as well,
don't you have any shame?

So I maybe different.
The things I draw may not be beautiful,
but they're what comes from my soul.
The poetry I write,
it might be suicidal,
it might be dumb,
but that isn't the rule of thumb.

Go ahead and say it.
You hate me,
I know you do.
But why the hell,
would I spend my time,
doing the exact thing you do?

Comments

[cowboy lowrah]

Poems don't have to rhyme, they just have to sound beautiful and come from deep in your heart. If I were you, I'd ditch the rhyming. But it is a pretty good poem.

[Uta Sumire]

Honestly, the do and do thing was kinda a typo. I was just sooo pissed off when I wrote it. Thanks for pointing it out. smile

[NeoBurley]

work on some of the rtymes same is just like shame and so with the last para what that rytmes do with do, work on that besides that good idea