Darkness

• Artist: User_17484639
• Description: A poem I wrote that is pretty bad, but I wanted some feed back.
• Date: 08/23/2009
• Tags: darkness poetry death dead eclipse

In the darkness I sit
Waiting for it
The Sun and the eclipse
When the world sits alone
Weak and Prone
That is what I live for
When it is the dead of night
And the world sits in fright

(I know I used sits too many times)

Comments

[Hitotsu Dalawa]

nice poem phe, i really liked this one too :3