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Why?
Why when I see you I cant speak,
Yet when im away from you I feel so weak;
Because knowing I cant see you for awhile makes me cry,
Almost to the point where I feel I might die;
Just thinking of seeing you though makes me smile,
Even though if i don't soon I might die in awhile;
We are growing apart more and more,
Making my heart even more sore;
I feel like i'm going to be really sick,
Because just yesterday I yelled at you and called you a d**k;
Why am I dead right now not with you,
Why, Why?
Oh yeah,Because I hated you;
- by swiggety swoogity |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/24/2009 |
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- Title: WHY
- Artist: swiggety swoogity
- Description: Very Depressing time for me.....thought i'd express it in a poem.
- Date: 08/24/2009
- Tags: sadness depression detachment lonlieness fear
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Emo-Dei-Kyuubi - 08/25/2009
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I personally like the poem very much... It's something I can relate to right now... I'd probably think about working on the ending a little bit though. I think that you could add a little more.
It is a great poem though ^^ - Report As Spam