Don't Call Me Baby Anymore

• Artist: Slaje
• Description: A song wrote from the point of view of a woman.
• Date: 08/27/2009
• Tags: dont call baby anymore

Don't Call Me Baby Anymore

3 am my cell phone rings.
He gives excuses and offers me things.
I say I'm done and we are through.
He says' "But Baby, I love you".

Don't call me Baby
anymore.
Don't show your face
at my door.

Don't try to make up,
it's our last break up.
Shut up. Don't try.
Just hang up and Goodbye

You'd only lie
while I'd try.
Always late
and want sex every date.

Days go by.
On the couch I lie.
A knock at the door.
"Babe, let's try once more".

Don't call me Baby
anymore.
Save your breathe
and leave my door.

Don't try to make up,
it's our last break up.
Shut up. Don't try.
Go to Hell. Goodbye.

Comments

[ll Sexual Feeling ll]

I sense a lot of anger within this? But I do like how you wrote this from a opposite point of view as artists should try to have a broader perspective of what's going on around them.

[Becca_dactyl]

Add a variety of language, not just simple words like lie, and terms like make up. 3/5

[cre8ive_ovadose]

that's really good, really effective and striking 5/5 ^^

[poeskitten]

thats really cool, i like it