pheonix

• Artist: Vito321
• Description: this a poem called a hiaku it is made of of a format that goese 5 sylebles, 7,than 5 agian
• Date: 08/30/2009
• Tags: pheonix

Rises with the sun

Lives during the day light

Dies during the night

Comments

[Deadlylight6]

lives doesnt have the ' mark. so ur 2nd line is actually 6 syllables

[suger rush 5]

i love it thanks for the cheering up!!