Love like Razor Blades

• Artist: Cyanide Surprise
• Description: I wrote this poem on Friday, September 05, 2008 . im not really sure what to say about it. i really enjoyed it when i finished and i hope you guys feel the same. dont be shy to leave honest criticism, i would like to hear kind words mostly but i can take a few things that will improve my writing. this is my first time submitting a poem so i hope it turns out good.
• Date: 09/07/2009
• Tags: love like razor blades

razor blade lips
cut so deep
skin so soft
heart so weak

cuts running deep
blood runs
dark and slick
shines like metal

kisses so pure
breathing speeds up
seconds go by like minutes
touches so soft

losing myself in you
slicing so deep
feeling so good
never felt so real

never felt a love like this
never felt so alive
baby
dont ever go