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The rain sounds pretty outside my window
The trees, the canopy, & all I know
It seems to form an endless maze
The stars seem dimmer, among the haze
The rain drops sting, but that's all you want
The dancing drops, my skin they taunt
To be as free as water flows
To be as free as the breeze blows
Paradise's chaotic vices
The moon beams shine in silver slices
Upon some old forgotten place
The waves they whisper: Make haste, make haste"
- by Grimlikins |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/27/2009 |
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- Title: Paradise's Chaotic Vice's
- Artist: Grimlikins
- Description: Like the first poem I ever posted for people to see >.>;
- Date: 09/27/2009
- Tags: paradise chaotic vices
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- Arkelle - 09/27/2009
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^^ I love it~
The flow is nice and I love the use of imagery - Report As Spam