Second Choice

• Artist: danzergirl1
• Description: True story about how i really don't like being picked under my friends. Its selfish i kno, but no one understands the pain,
• Date: 10/10/2009
• Tags: second choice

I'm through being a second choice,
I want people to hear my voice.
I want to be picked over my beautiful friends,
So i can fall in love all over again.
I don't want to be the last one noted,
What does it take a girl to be noticed?
I'll try my hardest,
But they look at them and fall.
Am i even solid at all?
Am i a window and not a door?
One look at her, and i'm on the floor.
I'm so sick of being last,
It's all coming to me so fast.
Who will pick me if i'm plain and quiet,
And if i try to be outgoing,
No one buys it.
I've made my choice,
Screw you guys,
I'm giving up,
Till you see life through my eyes.

Comments

[Uyama_Hiroto]

I like your word choice a lot, but there's something thats bothering me, overall i love the poem, but since it rhymes on every sentence it kills the feeling a little, maybe if you changed the rhyme scheme a little, but otherwise awesome! keep posting 4/5