attraction

• Artist: krit305
• Description:
  ok so here is a poem that i created no rymes and nothing it is a poem comment on it so i can inprove ps i know i selled things rong
• Date: 10/14/2009
• Tags: oposing forces attract love

the day we met
the day we drifted
but the day we atttraceted
is much stronger
you know we both
fell the same
so let the attreachion bettween
us colide and
cause a time shift and a
crack in the space above lets fall in to
a abys of love and
never come out
lets drif in to a black hole to gether
enywere i am enywere i go i want to
be ther with u and only you
let the attraction flow

Comments

[transiti0n]

I know you know, but try to spell things correctly? It may have no rhymes, but its the meaning in it, and sir you got it. I love the idea of this. Keep going.

[westernsnog]

I think you need to edit it because it was hard to understand with all of the misspellings...but overall i like it...I like freehand writting and you have a really good base and idea!