alone

• Artist: Evil Demon Leader
• Description: please rate and please comment its important to me to know how to make my poetry writing better thanks!
• Date: 10/20/2009
• Tags: alone

i am forever alone,
darkness is what i own,
these streets i roam are wasted,
for there is only one who has tasted,
the tears of the heart,
pulled from it with a start,
and forced to accept the truth,
lives are spent in our youth,
but as you leave it behind,
Darkness becomes the bind,
that helps you live,
but never to forgive,
that one that stabbed your heart,
and put it in a poison fillled cart,
so they can push it away from you,
and never to realize what else is true.

Comments

[Evil Demon Leader]

i never said i was emo.....

[oOo_shygirl_oOo]

why why why? make it so dark and not light even if your emo it soesnt mean its alway depressed emo means emotinal not depressed emotinal as in happy,sad,xited etc think about it

[vonnsilva]

This is why you are "forever alone"--Your writing is an abomination of the worst kind. Please, don't mistake "emo" for "deep." The two have different meanings.