Nothing but Lies

• Artist: sweetgirl101209
• Description: I finally got the time to write another poem...plz rate and comment ;)
• Date: 10/21/2009
• Tags: nothing lies darkness pain alone

I am not alone
I am not afraid
I am not depressed
I am not hanging by a thread
I am not about to fall
But if I do someone will catch me
I am not in pain
I am not suffering with every breath
I am not lost in the dark
I am strong
I'll be fine

Words I wish were true
But they're not
This is not a fairytale
With a happily ever after
It is a living hell
That I live everyday

I pretend to be alright
I wear a fake smile
To hide my pain
To cover-up my suffering
It seems to work

My toes now hang over the edge
My hair waving in the wind
The endless waves of darkness inviting me in
I must join them
I must end the lies
I bid you farewell

Comments

[XxRebelChildxX]

I hope this is not the last farewell, you really have a gift with poetry and I think you should live to continue writing. This was really good, It had little twists in it and thats one of my favorites with writing! Keep it up 5/5

[xxX3mo HeartedXxx]

well at the beginning it says ur not in pain
or any thing? but when you get in the middle it says
you are. the poem its self is pretty confuusing
but other than that i really like the meaning and
how it keeps me thinking
with every word.