forced to say goodbye

• Artist: Xsmexii_elmoX
• Description: just a poem i decided to write. It may not be long and it may not make sense to some people but personally i think it's a wonderful poem ^^ please comment and rate thank you and have a nice day
  P.S. please let me know if i misspelled anything by commenting the error
• Date: 11/07/2009
• Tags: your goodbye

the sun will set
the moon will rise
you will see
what you have dreamed
something you need
or something you want
you will see
the true form of nature
tho the light forms above
will go in deeper space
for now is the time
you say goodbye

Comments

[critic-the-homeless]

its simple... It is easy ti understand... 4/5