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Soft Autumn Breeze,
Blows through my window,
Moving my curtains
But I care not,
For its presence is welcomed,
Soft Autumn Breeze
So, I welcome it,
Quietly, kissing my face,
Yes, softly it does
And that's it, the traditional version. Usually I just come up with three, but six is fine too.
- by TehCookieCrispRox |
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- | Submitted on 11/13/2009 |
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- Title: The Autumn Breeze
- Artist: TehCookieCrispRox
- Description: Yes, this another haiku of mine. I wrote this last week, inspired by the weather I've been having. This haiku is longer, though. Now remember, the first line is 5 syllables, the second is 7, and the last is 5, too. Of course they won't be full sentences, but they will complete the thought.
- Date: 11/13/2009
- Tags: autum breeze haiku
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Comments (1 Comments)
- pumpkinmilk - 11/25/2009
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It's very lovely.
And I'm horribly picky about haiku poems. - Report As Spam